Well, look what gems the C2s will turn up. =)

I had a good time reading this; the way Jin, Mugen and Fuu have at each other is patently hilarious. (Poor Fuu, she seems to always be getting the short end of the stick.)

Of course, I realize this was published in '06, so you may have lose the inspiration for it - but I'd dearly love a continuation.

I like your way of discribe Jin's point of view. You show the caracters just as I imagine they are watching the original anime. a well written storie, pleasant to read...Update soon!
good luck!

lol so funny. beware the squrrly wrath. i like it and i can't wait for the next one to come out.

KICK THE MUSES! Kick them hard!

I see you posted this in 2006, and I hope you haven't lost your writing spirit, because I really liked this first chapter and was hoping to see more.

I think you portrayed the characters well, and I liked reading the story from Mugen's point of view.

Really hope you consider writing more,

Angel Led Astray.

This is so good!

I enjoyed the story very much. It made me think about how without Jin, Mugen and Fuu, probably wouldn't have gotten so far in their journey to find the samurai who smells of sunflowers. Mugen does go on the defensive very easily, doesn't he? But sometimes I think he is the one who saved Fuu more often. He went back for her at the brothel, even though she had already escaped, and rescued her from being sold to a European country after that one man drew a picture of her. The part about the coin toss-did Fuu lie about the outcome again like the first time? Anyway, I would like it if you continue with the story because it is really well written.

I love it! I always thought that Momo should play a bigger part in most story lines and Jins thoughts are portrayed very nicely.

Lovely and very well written. I'm glad that they were kept in-character and it was very insightful. :D Wonderful fic.

Seconds Please! This was a great one-shot and would make an even better full-length story. Please continue.

*puts hand up in the air* Continuation please!

It's a good one-shot, and you captured the characters well (No one can be expected to do it perfectly, unless it was the anime's creator or something...). I can definently see this going on as a story. So...

Continuation please!

Jajajaja!! (That was, by the way, laughter...) Keep writing!
Toodles,
bobalina
P.S. A continuation would be fabulous! But don't feel obligated or anything...

Oh, I like it!~_~ Very cool that it is Jin telling the story! I think that you should continue because I thought Jin in his wired way of his was rather funny.

haha that was kinda funny
i think you should update it
besides i wanna find out what happens to mugen

Aw its sweet and hilarious. Please continue!! You have their characters done so well, and it's very well written. I'm adding you to my story alert list.

Do continue, please! I want to see what happens. Very spot on on Mugen's character, and I like hearing this from Jin's POV.

Barbara