I thought this might be a decent story but the short paragraphs you have posted so far do not make it worth the energy bothering to click the mouse so many times, I mean from what Ive seen so far the story is only just long enough to be a one shot.

I saw the abusive review some twit left you. Sorry about that; as Chaucer told prospective readers of the Canterbury Tales, if they do not find it to their liking, then turn another page--as in find someone else's work to read and trash.

*sigh*

My concern here is that you have avoided Madame Pomfrey too much. She might have wanted to send HG to St. M's at first, but after they had continued problems, I find it hard to believe that Mrs W would suggest a Muggle hospital (especially after the conniption she had over Arthur's stitches in CoS!). I also find it impossible that HP would have just let St. M's toss them and not gone straight to Madame P. Combined, I think you have a very serious plot/character hole to sort out.

Similarly, HP's letting them banish him from GP during a premature birth is also unbelievable. The HP we have come to know and (sometimes) love wouldn't have let a.n.y.t.h.i.n.g keep him away from her during that. No weenie healer was going to come up with a locking spell that HP couldn't find a way through, even if he had to wreck most of the hospital to do it.

Hi! I've read 'til chapter 7 right now, and I'd like too give my opinion :)

This is clearly a different story: usually, it's most about the normal, people being brought back from death and things like that (not that that's bad!)..

oops, I slipped off... back to the comment:

your story is, as I said, different, but I like it that way. You create your own little world with characthers everyones know, and that's good. I also like the fact that Voldemort isn't dead, it's a new thing

well, I can't say more right now, I want to read, so I'll read

but hey, don't let super-critical people push you into a wall, go on!

Love

Excellent ending. It's nice to see that there will be a sequal to this story.

From what I read in the summery (chapter 23) it seems to Harry's story all over again.


-Mark-

Hey Sam!! It's morgan! O. O.O I like it VERY much! POST IT! Please, please? Pretty please with a cherry on top?!

It's Morgan and Laura here. WRITE THE SEQUAL! FAST! And post! Fast, fast, fast, fast, FAST! NOW! Before we hunt you down!
Thank you so very much. I love you. I love you. I love you.

Woowee! Just read through this whole thing in one sitting. I'm excited to read the sequel now, but that might have to wait till tomorrow. Anyway, great story though. Awesome idea. I really liked it. YAY!

-SkyRogue

i really liked them and even if ron came back harry and hermione should be togethor
bye x0x0x0x0

OMG! This is the number one best Harry and Hermione fanfic in the world! I LOVE it! It's just beautiful! You were like BORN to be a writer! The plot was perfect and this is just wonderful! Keep up the great writing!

WOW! im speechless! that was absolutly amazing. incredible, best ive ever read! that was so awesome. u r a wonderful author!

DUDE! That ruled

since when did molly weasley start wearing mascara?and shouldn't it have become penelope weasley?other than that it's good.

Hey, I know that you said that you were typing up a sequel, but which one is it? Or have you not posted it yet? Let me knbow soon!

~Airwithwater (I'm on a time limit!)

right after i got home from camp and unpacked, the first think i did was run to the computer to see how many of my favorites were done, and i was SO excited to see this one (my favorite of all favorites) got a lot more chapters!

IT WAS AMAZING! I.CAN.NOT.WAIT for the sequal. i didnt get to check to see if you started it yet, but i will right after i submit this.

*~DANiELLE COLLiNS X33~*

Hey his baby has miscarraged and his wife/girlfreind is dead don't you think he would show some emmotion?