this is great so far, sorry i haven't reviewed, i just keep forgetting to and to set alerts so i can keep up, but anyway, please update as soon as you can

wow this is amazingly good, I can't wait for the next chapter! Your writing is supurb, the characterization is amazing, and the plot is very interesting and engaging! This is one of the most PWNing stories I've read! ^.^'

I just finished embracing dreams and I LOVE IT SO MUCH. I love you too, btw. :D

First, I gotta say that the line "Remind me to touch you later" is probably my favorite ever. Kakashi totally cracks me up in this story. I love him! :D

Second, what is your updating schedule? If it's anything like mine, there's no schedule. haha. It's just I started reading this a couple months ago and it was only up to like chapter 25 or something like that. Well, the computer I was on isn't the one I'm on now (it was my mother's, now I'm on my own) and I forgot the story's name. I just found it again and read through the entire thing. :D I was just wondering if you updated a whole bunch of chapters at the same time or if you updated it with a chapter at a time. *shrug* It doesn't really matter all that much, as long as you're updating, but I was just curious. :D I mean that in the nicest way. I'd be too much of a hypocrite if I tried to get you to update faster. Lord knows I need to get my butt in gear with my Originals and my fanfics. haha.

Third, I actually found your site before I found you on FFnet, which is weird since I spend half my life on FFnet. haha. So, if you would, I'd love it if you could translate the chapters of Taiyou no Sumika. :D It owns my life. Haha. No pressure though. If you don’t want to that’s okay. :D

Fourth, I love this story with the deep depths of my soul. :D It’s so amazing! I love the mutant powers. I love the characters. I love the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke and Iruka and Kakashi. Oh, they’re so in character and amazing. :D I love Shikamaru in this, and Lee is so cute. I absolutely love Kyuubi! Love, love, love him! I always love FanFiction!Kyuubi, but you just knock the others’ socks off with this! Mmhmm. I don’t know what else I could say except I love everything! The whole idea is awesome. Wonderful. :D

Fifth, I hope you update soon. :D I wanna know what happens to Sasuke, who, by the way, made me laugh with his hallucinations. I’m mean. XD haha.

So, wonderful story! It’s awesomeness all over. :D

i screamed in two voices wen i realized tis was were it friin STOPPED! write more please,...or...um...my muse says ell...put te barrel of a sotun up yo-EW!!

//...please dismiss my dimwitted connection...and i said a andun up your arse*bet you can tell wic keys were so cruelly PRESSED SO FAR IN ITS IMPOSSIBLE TO REMOVE TEM- Sayonara//

narusasu fluff! LOVE IT! and how kakashi asked Shikamaru bluntly if he could have sex with Iruka. HAH! Oh god I thought i was going to die of lack of breath! HAH!I really want to see his journey to get the approvals.. Its gonna be good. tehe!

Okay, listen here Arigatomina,
I have been a reader of this fic since the day it was written,
And I have been waiting ovr a month for this new chapter to be on my computer screen,
Chapter 40 to be exact,
But no I see the number 39,
Odd numbers upset me and I think for my mental health you should make that odd number an even one by updating this very lovely fanfic here,
I'm addicted okay I MUST READ the next chapter or I'll go insane,
So just so you know you got yourself a fan here,
A very obsessed fan of this particular fanfiction,
It would satisfy me tremendously if I go to read all the way until the end until it is complete to put my mind at ease,
So yeah...just so you know :]

Just thought I'd send you a loving review commemorating the ONE MONTH SINCE YOUR LAST UPDATE! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, UPDATE!! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US-?!

That was the most epic game of "I've never" ever. If I ever play a game of "never have I ever" that is 75% as epic, I will consider my life as really a rather fulfilling layover in the waking world. And Shikamaru...I'm so glad you gave him such an *interesting* hand in things.

I haven't pulled an all-nighter in a while. That was totally worth it.

The balance of different moods and plot-lines you've got going here is absolutely addictive. Thank you so much for the awesome.

Okay, I'm not even done with this chapter but I felt the need to stop and comment on how the cuteness is giving me spasms (good spasms, very very good spasms. And they actually are spasms, me twitching in my chair, trying not to wake the people next door...)

The interaction between Sasuke and Naruto...the relationship between the demon fox and Naruto...the image of Naruto climbing up the furry leg of a demonically gigantic God of (voluntarily & ultimately sacrificially) past glory...it's so endearing that my plans to sleep at all tonight have been scrapped.

Bravo.

I've been laughing so much since I've started reading this. I love that your Naruto has the whole "yes!!-lets-fight-because-it-would-be-awesome-so-awesome-that-it-would-put-all-other-awesome-to-shame" thing going on. And Sasuke's all out of his depth. Such great character interaction.

I've never really been an active fan of Kakashi and Iruka because..well..mostly because I still don't understand what in the canon made that such a logical (virally popular) conclusion (I'm still planning on researching its origins...). Their interactions here have enough merit of their own to suspend my normal "...but...why?...O__O" reaction. Great stuff.

"Maybe he'd drop and lose the bag carrying the porn. Kakashi would die. It would be entertaining."

Oh god. It's so wonderful. The psyochotic homicidal side notes of Sasuke's internal monologue are absolutely priceless and the multitude of very distinctive POVs really takes one of the best things about third person and runs with it.

I'm really enjoying the awesome. Great premise (the way you worked in the canon with mutant powers? bravo), great characterization (and you say there's a sequel in the (re)works!? *_*).

Love it, keep going.

What can i say...WOW!
Amazing story so far - can't wait to read more.

This is a great story! I love the plot and your characterization.

I especially like that you treat equally Naruto and Sasuke. Neither is treated like a weak damsel in distress or a sensitive wreck like it is often done in many fanfics. They both have their issues but they are undeniably strong.

You are amazing, I can't wait to read the next chapter ^^