Ha ha ha - amusing, clever, cute, and real. I loved every bit of this. Race's logic was baffling at best, and Spot's agreeing to it all was hysterical. This is a very good little one shot, congrats.

Ha! I love it to death! That was so cute and full of fluffy-ness! Haha! I love it!
Keep it up!
~Lucks

Now that is high quality Race and Spot interaction. I love the characterization and the banter. It's sweet and realistic. I loved it.

Ah, I read this on The Refuge as part of the Spring Slash Exchange, and I most certainly loved it. The dialogue is fantastic- it feels natural and true to the characters, but you don't try to use it to tell all of the story.

I really loved this piece: it was my favorite in the Exchange. Great work!

Yay! You're writing again! This pleases me. Of course, you know that I loved it. I think I would have slapped him though. But, today I'm in a slapping mood.

This is a wonderful story. Heartwarming and humorous.
The characterization was excellent. (Your Racetrack was exceptional!)

“It was just that spending time with Racetrack was like playing stickball with live ammunition.”
That is one of the best lines I have ever read.

The part about Spot growing a beard actually made me laugh.

BTW Spelling is not my strong suit, but I didn’t see any mistakes.

Well, that was certainly interesting. The thing I noticed most were the spelling mistakes here and there and a few sentences that didn't flow right, but other than that i don't know of anything that can be fixed. The story was really good. ^_^ I like the interesting twist at the end. Very nice.