good so far and is there anymore plus wat happen to shikamaru and temari?

Please update soon.

you should continue this story. it is very good.

Definitely a good story. I do hope you find time to come back to it. It'd be a shame not to finish it.

Excellent start here. ITs too bad it seems you gave up on this story. It has some real potential from this opening chapter. I'll add it to my favs in case you ever update it again.

nice chap update! ! !

more thats all i can say even though it doesnt look like uve updated for a long time.

keep up the good work cant wait till u update soon i hope:)

NARUXTEM IS THE BEST PAIRING EVER!

cool it nice and sweet

Good story so far, I hope you update soon.

so far i like this story. Keep it up.

good start, please keep it up.

much love

hope x

well this was great update soon

Masterfully done! Update soon I enjoyed it emmensly.