You just made me pity Larxene. Wow, I love you.

Haha, I love how this has generated possibly sympathy for Larxene. And I love how she's much to proud to ever take such sympathy.

Gorgeously done, I believe it's very true to Larxene form.

I'm glad someone could convey what I believe Larxene is put through.

Poor girl and her boys that bark at other **. Heart breaking really. Marluxia and Namine is so, so, /so/ wrong but it makes everything a little darker, and a little sicker.
I liked this alot. :]

Oh. Ow. You just made me hurt for Larxene. It's weird; you kind of get used to feeling sorry for Namine and Roxas, but Larxene... she's new. Love how the whole thing's jagged and erratic, just like her. And this:

What she can't understand was if they loved them why couldn't they have loved her first.

is awesome. Kudos.

That's...good, but a little weird. And the AkuRoku moment at the end scares me. I don't do slash!

Strange concept but I guess it works in it's own weird way.

I was always freaked out with Marluxia/Namine pairings, that's pedophilia at its finest in my mind...
Nice Ending!

Well...I suppose being the only woman in a Organization like that would make you the most likely suspect for stuff like this. It bites but she deals with it the only way she can. Tries to be a hardass and not care, using the lack of heart as an advantage. I guess she's lucky she doesn't have one is something like that. This was amazing ^_^. I love it!

Fantastic. Simply fantastic.

wow.
amazing...
*speechless*

reading that was like taking a breath of fresh air. it was really nice to read about a larxene with depth and emotion. great job ^_^

Aww, poor Lar-Lar~! Being used as a substitute! *huggles*

It was...ugh, brain fart. It was awesome.

Aw
that was beautiful,
It made me so sad.
Very well written
Keep up the great work and write more!
Yuuzai

Awesome. ^^

Wow. i suddenly, maybe, possibly MIGHT feel sorry for Larxene now. Good job. I never really thought of her that way, having a jealousy streak concerning the two. Poor girl.