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| Darkangelsonic 2008-09-08 ch 1,  | abuseTHIS IS SO SO SO NICE! @_@ hahahaha I LOVE IT! You're friend is right it was worth posting. *grins* And this morning I even dreamt about Ray from beyblade. It was sort of... Weird since they weren't playing beyblade... They were having this Yu-Gi-Oh promo tournament... hahahahaha So odd. Anyhow. It's very nice. *Smiles* |
| ChaoticChild 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseWow...so cool...i liked it a lot... |
| Raven100104 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseWHAT!?!?!?! PLEASE KEEP GOING I CAN'T WAIT! |
| Raphael of the Angels 2006-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThere, I put my e-mail there for you if you want to get back at me. Or you could flame me back if you like, it's Asagi Tsuki, but I'm not gonna care. Flamers suck. First of all, what is the point of this story? Even though you put it in the humor section, I fail to detect any sense of humor in your fic, and here I think I have a good sense of humor. Is it just me, or is your fic just too plain? Not humorous at all. Okay, so it's your dream, but do you HAVE to post it here? I mean, hey, does tell you to unleash your imagination and blah blah blah, but that doesn't give you the freedom to post every dreams and little fantasies you might have. Grammar is at least good. I like the grammar part, no fatal mistake whatsoever, but the convos do give you confusion. I had to reread the last line in which the speaker was told before I have to count towards the line I was confused at. And that's only to know who said that line. You could give some more explanations, or shorter convos without explanations. Convos like that are used to write humor stories, I know, but not THAT long. Well, I guess I should finish here. It's already too long for my liking, and I have no more time to waste. I hope to see you get better in writing 'coz your grammar's fine already (IMO) and I don't want authors with decent grammar waste their skills. |
| yuki-tenshee 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abusehehehe... cute. very cute. |
| Ame Mika'zuki 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abusehehehe... nice one michio!! ^^ who's the girl by the way?? o_O? CONTINUE WRITING, NE? never stop! ^^ |
| akai ladycuteluck 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseAnother great fic. Also, a very funny one, especially the ending. Hehehe... LOL. You're such a great writer, so don't even think about discontinuing your stories, 'kay!? Luv yu!! Also, you mispelled friend in your summary. Just sayin it. Keep on writing!! ^-^ |