haha...cute i love the blank note i can just picture him trying to figure out what to write

"What am i supposed to write ..." stares at blank note "Eh..." throws note in bento box and put's it on Hinata's pillow and walks out

eheh .-.

hm...was the note symbolism?you should make another chapter explaining it a little better...

Some sort of hidden message? I don't get why the note was blank. But I bet you're not the first author to have a secret hidden inside his/her story that only they know. XD

I wasn't sure whether Neji ate the bento, but the blank piece of paper Neji sends her was a great catch. aw... He can't find the words to express himself. I really liked it!

Great one shot, although I have to admit, I was very confused at the ending. Was the note blank because Neji just couldn't come up with the words to say? Did he save a bun just for her? It would be lovely if you could clarify that.

But wonderful story-beautifully written and in character. :)

hi never expeted this fanfic would be nice

I love your Neji Hinata work! Everything is adorable but not fluffy, which is good. Neji and fluff is weird.

yo that was a really sweet story. :)

but i didnt get what the meaning was behind the blank note, was she meant to read it with her byakugan or something?

do tell!

You know, that was really sweet! It was subtle, not too flowery, but rather lovely! (god, i'm bad with words) Very cute, believable story. Enjoyed it much!

I'm not sure if that was a one-shot or not, but it was very cute. Quite believable too!

Wah! w This story is cute although i can't imagine tenten doing pushups w It's sweet, but i think neji should've said SOMETHING in that note ;3; Curiousity killed the cat, afterall!

*runs in and glomps you*

your neji is such an interesting character...he's got so many layers it really is hard to understand him..i kinda understand hinata feels...(i'm not complaining)...she always tries her best and i hope that she doesn't take it to heart..he's just eniqmatic...i can't wait to see what you'll come up with next..plz write more...*begs on knees* PLEASE OH PLEASE

oh and i'm not very good with grammar or anything so i can't(or won't most likely)criticise about that...sorry...thanks again

*jumps up and runs away*

Wow. I mean, wow. Awesome