Great! Just great!

I almost cried...

Wow, that done perfectly. You nailed Kian's personality, his thoughts . . . everything. You should write more, this game needs more fanfics.

Ooh, I like this. It gives the unspoken chemistry between April and Kian a name, and it pretty much shows what probably happened after the screen went black. Nice work!

I like it. Good post-Dreamfall thoughts. I'm really glad people are starting to contribute to the game world that deserves the most fanfiction... I truely believe no game world (besides Xenogears, another underrated wonder) ever had as much thought put into it as TLJ. I'm waiting for someone to write a long tail about the game world, but for now I'll settle for short stories. And this was a good one. Keep it up!

I love it!

Ah! I love it!

Kian is one of those characters who only really get examined under the eyes of fanfiction, or at least, only has the oppertunity to be examined.

Thanks for posting, there is so little TLG fanfiction to begin with, i only hope dreamfall creates some more interest.

I don't think April's dead either, but man do i want another game soon. Damn you Ragnar! You tease!

Again, great story