That was really tender. Your story played out so easily in my mind.

And there was some interesting foreshadowing.

Beautifil little one shot. Thanks, Beth

Reviewing my own story in a late (very late) response to the anonymous reviewer who snarkily pointed out that all babies are born with blue eyes.

Your review taught me two things: (1) you did not read the story (Alan said, "Do you think they'll turn brown?" - that means they are not brown right now, genius); and (2) you are too much of a wuss to use your name when leaving snarky reviews.

Aww, baby Charlie is adorable!

ALL babies are born with blue eyes!

So at a few hours old [as you say C is] he'd have blue eyes still.

i like that one it was cute

Aww. *sniff, sniff* Made me cry too. Love it.

Very sweet although it didn't bring me to tears. Just left

me with a nice contented feeling.

The nose bit was adorable. Poor little urchin. Margaret

said exactly the right thing.

one word! SO CUTE! er... one, two, wow i can't count... and i watch numb3rs? *me shakes head* great work on your part though... love your stuff fraidy!

aw how loving! and the last line was sad considering what was to happen later!

aw - that's got me all choked up now!:) nice work, again!:):)

*sniffle* That. was.. so... CUTE! Anyways, thank you for making my day brighter : )

So sappy, I love it.

OMG! That was so cute and sweet. I loved it. I'm glad you wrote another story so soon. You're good at that. Thank you!