A very good fic. I like the internalization of Logan, even if he is an **. I agree. He is an interesting character to dissect. And you did a good job writing about him.
Bill O'Reilly, Papa Bear 2006-05-11 . chapter 1
I remember you... you're that LJ no_slash_zone fool that started all the fandom_wank.
Logan is a great character to do a study on, but, with all the comma splices, yours is essentially unreadable.