this story is so..
comical.
oh lordy. :)
everyone is pretty much OOC and shes always just sitting there and her daddy comes and beats her. mk. poor child.

OMG! I just realized I never reviewed the ending!
Oh, it was so sad to have another ending. But I know there's a sequel. I'm sad that it's the last one, though! You did an awesome job with this story! I'm so happy it's turned out so well. Great job!

OMG! OMG! OMG! FIRST YOU KILL PONY AND NOW YOU KILL THE LOVE OF MY LIFE? AH! HOW COULD YOU? WHY? WHY?!
Sorry it's been so long since I've reviewed. Like I said, I'm getting too lazy. HOW COULD YOU?!

If I am Lois, than I should be at Superman's funeral too, should I not?

Kali

Breathe in, breathe out, breathe in, breathe out.

Ok, the spelling mistakes there turned it into an incestrious **.
*Breaks out laughing*

*tear*

Kali

Poor Soda.. I am here for you...hehehe lol. DARRY CANT BE DEAD!1

Kali

OMG. Does that mean Darry is dead? Or kidnapped?

Kali

*tear*

kali

OMG NOT MY SUPERMAN> IT'S ME, LOIS DONT DIE! DARY!

Kali

Aw...*tear*

kali

What's the point of reviewing if she doesn't even read them?
If she does read them, what's the point of reading them if you won't take the advice offered?

I'm not the only one who said SPELLING and GRAMMAR CHECK, but she won't do it.

If you're typing on wordpad or something, sign on to send a review, paste your fic in the box and click Check spelling. It won't catch grammar but you're spelling sucks too.

Then again, I doubt you read this anyways..

YOU MADE MY SODA CRY@! lol. She's 12 and she calls her mom mommy?

Kali

Darry is such a softie

lol

Kali/Lois

Aww lol

Kali