Be careful with your sentence structure. Sometimes it's awkward or hard to read.

I used to love angst, but nowadays it's more fulfilling to have some resolution, or even just a suggestion of one, whether it be that Henry gets over it or kills himself.

I don't really think Henry had a choice to kill Walter slowly. I mean, why would he make that choice? Wouldn't he lament just being too slow, weak, etc.?

If you rushed it, you should definitely look it over.

(Why are my reviews always disjointed?)

aGGAHAHAHAHHAHA!

*Head explodes*

EMO Henry? What the hell is this? It was good, but Henry can't be EMO, it just doesn't add up...

Well, I'll tell you one thing. This made me want to write a Silent Hill-Apocalypse story... Ragnarok...

...

I guess it'll go on my Favorites list.

~@_@~