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Robot Maddness Strikes
2006-09-08 . chapter 5
YAH! i'm NOT dead AND you posted! it's a miracle! But you know what this means. After all your buggin me now YOU have to post repidetly! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! sweet revenge! *simmers happily*

~Tubomba ^.^
Marinus-pseudothyrum
2006-09-01 . chapter 5
briliant, please up date soon!
I look foward to seeing how Tugger and Bomba's relationship pans out!
Maudey
2006-08-20 . chapter 5
"Ya some nonsense about some heavy side layer crap? How does that effect us, not like we’re going there anytime soon.” ~ Hm, something tells me they'll be on the otherside of Heaviside why they die...
Anyways, you're still going to have to explain how Demeter got all jumpy and stuff (you probably know this) and yeah. I like the voice you use in your writing and this story has an excellent plot. I always thought Bombalurina had a relationship with Macavity, just the way she sings the song it that strange type of pleasure. I'm glad you've decided to continue posting the chapters! Great story.
MacChang
2006-08-08 . chapter 1
Wow. This is a really well done story. Great job! And update!
Robot Maddness Strikes
2006-07-31 . chapter 4
And. I must ask this, why in the Everlasting Cat's name did you name yourself after Bomba but never finished this story!? Shame shame shame. shame shame shame shame. and even more shame! It is so good!

Tubomba ^.^
Bombi
2006-07-02 . chapter 2
Really cool story your'e my favorite author Bombalurinasara good job!:)
Puddycat
2006-06-09 . chapter 4
I love ths fic, you're really good at telling stories and giving just the right amount of description, but your grammar still needs some work. You should get a beta to check over this and correct any mistakes, but apart from that, just keep doing what you're doing 'cause this is great. ^_^
broadwaybuff
2006-06-01 . chapter 3
Man, that's cute...the way Bomba and Tugger first met. I dig that. Lol, anyway, since I'm out of my Hippie Zone, I think that this story is going to lead to somewhere VERY interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Puddycat
2006-05-25 . chapter 3
There were a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes, so you just need to proof-read a few more times before posting the next chapter. I'm loving this story, though, so keep it up. ^_^
poisonivy44
2006-05-16 . chapter 2
omg! I love this so far! update soon!
Tyrunner
2006-05-15 . chapter 2
As Frank from Everybody Loves Raymond would say, "HOLY CRAP!!" Please hurry with the next chapter!!
broadwaybuff
2006-05-15 . chapter 2
Wow.

That was interesting...and different!

Aw, a little gramattical mistakes here and there...

I can't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE!
Puddycat
2006-05-15 . chapter 2
Just a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but apart from that t'was very good. I'm definately looking forward to next chapter.
Puddycat
2006-05-11 . chapter 1
This looks really interesting, I'm definately looking forward to the rest of it. There were just a few minor grammatical mistakes, but overall it was really good. Update soon!
nodikus
2006-05-10 . chapter 1
Sounds like quite a change compaired to how you displayed her in 'The Eyes Of The Moonlight'. Lokking forward to reading more.
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