OH MY GOD! BEST STORY OF ALL TIME! you should put the name of the 'other story' on the end of this one. (you said in the last chap. thing, 'but that will be another story) I heard a dun dun dun, go off in my head! LOL!! great story!!

no... he's... omg... no... (cries)

WTF! stupid orochimaru! stupid baki! what the HELL is that idiot thinking!??

honey bear ne? lol. i can't believe those #$%&* (insert very colourful language here)

oro got saichi! no!!

stupid sasuke-teme.

sasuke is with oro. what the hell would he want with her.

Wow... some long chapters you got there,
well here goes nothing
I love your story
Love the way you arrange them (Way of writing/or typing)
the character's relationship are cute...
erm still I think you should split them up more, since it gets a little tired after awhile.
but don't worry, I'll read it till the end
hope you have an ending and not cliff hangers
keep up your good work!

OMG! RAINE! Curse you Sasuke!

ok so i have made it to chapter 7 finally. I really love this story and hope to finish it soon though I am reading rather slowly. I read the end though for no reason at all and it made me mad that gaara died. And then I read your sequal and it made me even more mad. The fact that she ends up with Sasuke just doesn't make sense to me. I mean Raine keeps on thinking that gaara was part of the reason Sasuke went evil. But the truth is sasuke would have went evil anyway. After he found out that he wasn't progressing and naruto was he would have joined orochimaru it wouldn't have mattered if gaara was there or not. Well I would just like to say I love your story and am looking forward to finishing it.

Great story. I'm just really upset about Gaara dieing. That's very sad. what will happen to his kids? Will they ever see each other agian? Please make a sequal. Just one question, are you a profeshional? Because your how you wrote the story is amazoing. How old are you? Again, amazing story.

wow. what a great story! rly update soon!thx for the uberlong chappies!

DAMNIT! TOO DAMN LONG! I put up with it for 3 chapters, but I'm not reading any more! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME! Gosh, you should have at least broken it up into a chornicle, instead of 19 LONG freakin' chapters.

...I seriously hope your not writing from personal experiance...

cute! ...but it's so ** long!