Reviews for A midsummer night's dream

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darkmoon203 2008-07-31 ch 25,	abuseOh god. You literally have no idea what kind of effect this story had on me. You had me bawling at the end. Yes, the end even though it was happy. I started to tear up in the beginning of chapter 24 and was a total wreck by the end of this. Now the thing is, I never...EVER cry while reading fanfiction. In fact over the four years (oh god I'm such a loser) that I have been reading fanfiction, this was only the third time ever that I have cried. The first two were four years ago. Anyway, enough about me crying. I must say, that this was an AMAZING story. You had me hooked from the first chapter. In my eyes, she's not a Mary-Sue. Yes Layla/Aier/Isilotse has the whole "young girl/woman (died)fell into Middle Earth" thing going for her, but her other actual flaws that one can see in a regular person made overshadowed all of that. Another thing I loved is how you described each character, honestly, they were all exactly the way I imagined them to be (although I'm used to the "emotionless Glorfindel" his personality here was a nice change; I must admit I like him this way more (; ) All in all, this is probably the longest review I have ever written, but what I am really trying to say here is that this was such a great fanfic and I am really saddened to "let it go". Great job, -DM
moonshine4488 2008-05-08 ch 25,	abuseok ok, so you put them together again. That does NOT make up for the fact that she left and I'm still crying over it. SERIOUSLY?! THAT was really depressing and sad. I mean great, they meet in our world, that STILL doesn't block out all the pain poor Glorfindel felt! I'm probably going to be bothered by this all night instead of writing the paper for my final. I would completely have chosen to knock all my family in a coma and brought them to Middle Earth: ) Anyways, fantastic story. Might there be a sequel about them in Valinor?
moonshine4488 2008-05-08 ch 24,	abuseI just want you to know, I'm bawling my eyes out right now.
moonshine4488 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseHi, I don't know if you are in college, but I just wanted to say this : "We should have outgrown the whole popular vs. unpopular thing when we graduated from high school. " It is so true. This is my first year of college, and I was expecting that people would have grown out of that by now! The Greeks seem to be horrible for it! Anyways, I'm going to continue reading : )
0tree0 2008-01-04 ch 25,	abusewow, that was on heck of an emotional journey, Aier was an incredible character and despite her insistence at being a Mary-Sue, i think she definitely managed to escape the title. The story is an enthralling one to say the least and i think the moments between Aier and Glorfindel were lovely. I would have loved to read their reunion in Valinor and what happened to Glorfindel after she left. This is by far the best LOTR's fic I've read i hope you decide to write more fic in LOTR as it's nice to see a story that is refreshingly not a 10th walker (slightly hypocritical there),a Mary-Sue or a Legomance. I liked O'l Glorfy the most and thought that Haldir was stuffy lol.
IsaDaYDrEaMer 2007-11-26 ch 25,	abuseHi! Just finish reading and have to say that I like it, it's a good fic, and not a Mary-sue... :D I like the 24 chap... good you make me cry (believe me, I don't cry). I know some things I didn't like but... in general I really enjoy it, and I think is good, a very nice ending, by the way. Kind of sand thought. Well, I wanted to say just that and ask if the title goes for the Silvio Rodriguez song, because I love that song (more like, I love Silvio jajaja) So a pleasure to read your fic, hope you do make something else of LOTR and see you around! P.D. Sorry for my terrible english, is just that I am from Guatemala...so I speak Spanish :P
Funeralfairy 2007-08-08 ch 25,	abuseI know it's been some time since you finished this fic, though I just had to say it has one of the best endings I ever have read in ANY story (that includes books/manga I've read and anime/movies I've seen)! I truly love it! I also think the storyline was well thought through and I really liked the gradual change in Layla's behaviour and personality... But, really, the best detail must have been her gradual change of speech!! It got really funny once I noticed ^^
GoldMary3 2007-08-02 ch 25,	abuseKonichiwa! Watashi mo nihongo o hanasemasu! My mum's originally from Japan, so I can speak the language fluently. Sorry. Anyways, I REALLY liked your story, it had a nice twist to the end, I thought that Layla would stay in M.E! I personally thought that Glorfy and Layla should have gotten together a little bit earlier, I was thinking 'FINALLY' when they kissed. But I'm really glad that they got together in the end. Keep Writing!! GM3
Elenya 2007-07-03 ch 25, anon.	abusei enjoyed this story rather alot, but i think the epilougue was, well out of context. it didn't fit and the ending was abit rushed. it would have been better i think to write a sequel in which layla read fellowship and felt a sort of strange affinaty with glorfindels charecter. and then somehow, the valar started to give her dreams of her time on arda, and then she wished to go back, and finally was returned her memories and they lived happily ever after. it would have been far more interesting than daer glorfy turning into a mortal in a new life. and seriously, i don't think that a nazgul could really kill glorfy. at least you could have said he faded from grieve or summat! ^_^!
Morgaine Rose 2007-05-12 ch 25, anon.	abuseWow, I loved your story. Yoy made me cry :-) (Thats a good thing) Have you written a story about Neala and Haldir too? If not, please do it. You writing is fantastic.
Kylria 2007-03-17 ch 4,	abusegood chapter, but just to let you know Erestor's hair is brown not blonde
Evohe 2007-03-10 ch 25,	abusea really good story, thank you for writing it. Evohe!
childofthekng 2007-01-11 ch 25,	abuseactually, since I really dislike sad endings, the epilogue was cool. it does happen in other time travel fiction too... the reincarnation theme. I do see how your characters have matured and grown over time. It's just to bad, in a LOTR theme way, that they couldn't get it together in ME!
daiquiri 2007-01-11 ch 25,	abuseomg this made me cry so bad :'( but it's so effing good, weldone :D daiquiri
kanefire 2007-01-09 ch 24,	abuseThis is indeed a sad way to end a great story. I would love to read the epilogue you wrote, I think you have to post it. You've already written it, so you know why.

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