 Rian Sage 10/30/06 . chapter 1Great thought process for Sky. And even still, you leave it rather open-ended. Which, to me, seems rather characteristic of Sky who's used to quick thinking and spur of the moment decision making. I must say, this one-shot deserves expansion. I see that you're done with fanfic. However, I think it would be interesting to see when the decision is finally made, and the repercussions when explaining it to Ming afterwards. Overall, I like how you handled this moment of indecision. Also, good job writing Kang. |