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| Free Fallin Cutie680 2006-08-01 ch 1,  | abusewow. that was really good. i didnt want it to stop. keep it up . yeah the akward romance is funny. but good still. well loved it. want more. write back. k? lUv |
| DXM Junkie 2006-06-17 ch 1, | abusethis was beautiful. clever too. favorites list this goes... |
| Tairi Soraryu 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat chapter. The present tense makes everything seem very in-the-now, sort of..urgent, almost. I like your descriptions of Kaname's feeling trapped. |
| ronshaberry 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWow, so epically normal! Or whatever. Do you see what I'm saying? I don't really know a lot about FMA, actually I know next to nothing. But it looks good! |
| AgentKaji 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseNice, very well done and I like your descriptions. Short, but to the point. A bit dark and I take it, it's going to be a one-shot? But very good nontheless! "Nevermind the casualties, just move forward!" |
| flys without wings 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuse*in awe* oh! That was beautiful! I wish you'd do one from sousuke's pov. Judging from this snippet, you are an excellent wirter!! |
| AwakenDreams 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abuseso sad... but nicly done I can see it. God Sousuke is such a block head... |
| '.'.'.Jesslca'.'.'. 2006-05-11 ch 1, | abuseVery well done, it was a good thing to read at the moment! :) |