! haha lol jk!! this chapter was rly good! umm...but r u just gonna...hm...! wel nywayz! keep writing and ill kep reviewing! i rly rly rly dont no if i should submit some of my stuff! *!^_^*

Lengthen it! I want to find out what all happens with Roxas gone! It's good though-you're welcome for taking the time to read it!

But STILL POOR POOR CLOUD!

(I'm still not over that...LOL)

Hey! thanks for the review ^-^ I read the story and I liked it. Its rely good teeming with detail ^_^ but it was a little short...

well il be lookin for updates ^_^

I thought that was really, really good...(even though it was short) I think you should write more, I bet it would be a really good fanfic.