Very good! And very romantic... I like your fics!

It was a very good fic. U really should think about continuing the story.

Fluffy goodness! Meep
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Hi!
Acchi story hai. Mujhe bahut maza aya! ^_^
Gambatte Kudasai!! (Keep it up!)
Bye!
Mikib

that's it?

so...kawaii :)

hey that was a really great story. it showed tsubasa as much more than a soccer genius nd as a really cute guy. please please write a sequel.

touche'

short but nice. hope you write more!

That was very touching, it was short but it was very good!

Anyway, there are some wrong grammars in your story, I hope you see them 'coz it will help you become a better writer!

Great story! I hope i'll be able to read more of your stories!

-~AnA~-