Loved it

Hahahahaha!

Niiiiiiice!

hahaha. XD seriousy? hahaha. my tummy hurts! 3

Not wearing her panties...poor mikan...i think i would die in that situation...like really...if i were mikan...sometimes i want to be her...and sometimes...i really don't...i USED TOO MANY(...) curse my non-grammar skills! Anyways, great job!

i love it and i hope youmake more

omg funny i had a dream like that when i was littel but it was my bra! hahaha lol

Hahahaha. How dense of her to forget. Natsume didn't look at her panty anymore. OTL

He saw something worse. LOL

You are my idol, Wrath of Athena-sama.

If ever you're reading this, I hope you come back to the fandom. :(

There aren't as much good works as there used to be. :(

LMAO! Natsume such a perv but I still like him. :D Mikan was so funny. HAHAHA she actually forgot to wear her underwear. OMG I can't stop laughing :))))))

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ROFL XD gawd! this story is awesome! you're really awesome, i tell you! i'm thinking that you've successfully made the characters here stuck to their original personalities! i can say that because the way you described every details of what would be their reactions is just appropriate. first thing is about Hotaru-the way she reacted to Mikan, then Yuu- when he consoled Mikan and there's also Ruka.- when he spared a glance to the two before leaving them made me imagined a scene the same way as the anime had shown me. that is what i'm thinking, really! so i was amazed. after realizing these things, i exclaimed that it really is the same Ruka! it's like it's so Ruka! hahaha and of course the same goes for our favorite couple too:)) *smiles sweetly* hahaha I like the part when Mikan realized that Natsume was holding her butt XD- oopss not with the dirty mind *smirks evilly* *grinning with wiggling eyebrows* hahaha i mean, Natsume doesn't really mean that, right? he was only trying to stay put Mikan's skirt in case the wind blows up and then flip it accidentally- and by that, Mikan's 'ehem' might be seen by others! the exact reason why Natsume is being possessive hahaha! and i think it was so sweet of Natsume to actually do that;)) hahahahahahahaha *squeals* well, it depends on you if that really is the case with what you originally planned making Natsume holds her butt*smirks evilly* i mean, it might just be otherwise, ne? *big grin* rofl haha! anyway, this is the last one-shot i have to read from you! and though i noticed that your updating rather slow or might not anymore, am still hoping for you to spread your 'awesome-ness' for the readers to read! like me! *big smile* thanks for the awesome stories! hope to see your new stories and updates very soon!

! ok, i think i just killed the a and h buttons of my key board. That was soo funny. I thought it was her panty, then i thought her hair... then you said panty and I doubled over.

I think it was cute that natsume followed her to make sure no one else saw. Fluffy nonethelesss :3 CUTE FIC OMG!

hahaha the last line was perverted without saying anything! And i figured that out when he blushed! xD

This was really good. OMG! NATSUME SAW HER ASS! Lols. Absolutely wonderful fic. Really just hilarious. I think you got Natsume's personality down perfectly, as well as Ruka's, Hotaru's, Inchou's...okay, so I guess you got everyone's personalities down perfectly...- Awesome fic. I don't think I've ever seen one this...well, where Natsume was acting like a completely normal guy, but still Natsume that was so good. (In other words, where Natsume was even more perverted than usual but was still acting like Natsume.) Loved it. Adding it to favorites. You said you'd check it later, so I'm not going to bother with a technical review.

Kokoroyomi: It's not because of that and you know it. It's because you're lazy.

Me (Nessie): WHAT? HOW DARE YOU READ MY MIND, KOKO?...oh, shit! KOKO YOU ASS HOLE!

Natsume you horny devil:)