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Reviews for: Can I Kiss You?
Aryna.Tahashi
2007-06-29 . chapter 1
Aww. That was sad. Poor Riku... Go and get your boy toy! Lol.
Raina
2006-05-16 . chapter 1
I loved it! I thought it was very cute and plausible, all things considered. Sora is such a fun muse to work with, huh?

One thing got me, though. Just one little sentence.

What did you mean here, "Sora reminds Riku, thinking of Selphie"?

I was hoping I hadn't stumbled into a tongue in cheek sort of narrative, where anything could happen. (Last thing I need is to read As I Lay Dying again. o.o) But still, very good!
paxawaii
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
ZOMGZ. [ le squee ]
this was soo freaking cute. mwah.
but a bit sad at the end :(
poor riku. WAH. it breaks my lil fangirly
heart that they're not together! *gets bricked*
ah i just loved it so much.
soraxriku are destined for each other XD YA RLy.
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Pandy
2006-05-15 . chapter 1
H'aw! +pounces+ Kher, you rawk my sawks!

Somehow, even though they're both ickle, you kept them in character. This was completely adorable, and now I'm tempted to write some exploratory drabbles from when they were littler...and I love the "we fight" thing.

Poor Riku...aw. +shoves Riku and Sora together+ Feel better!

+rambling+ Ahem, sorry. Jolly good fic, and all that jazz!
HanaTohruShipperMorgan
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
Aww, that was adorable! I really, honestly enjoyed it. I can't even seem to find anything to criticize. *sighs* Oh well.

In any case: liked the idea, the style, and the RikuSora-ness. Poor Riku...

Thank you for your review, by the way! I thought that, since you, too, were a SoraRiku fan, you might have some lying around... And I was right! n_n So, I'm reviewing.

Okay, I'm starting to sound stupid. I'll shut up now.

*adds to favorites*

Have a lovely day!
~ Morgan
Kingess
2006-05-14 . chapter 1
That was really, really good. Sweet, and sad. I got a little teary-eyed. You should completely write more one-shots. You've got a knack for it.
chicagoxpillowz
2006-05-12 . chapter 1
OHMYGAWD WHY??! That was so depressing...yet so good!! I can't stop reading it! I NEED LOVE! FLUFF! Why..why do I read teh' angsteh'ness...Awesome one shot though!! Yet...I think it would be cool if you added just..maybe...two more chapters or something? I don't know..I'm on crack and always will be..leave me alone! DAMMIT!!

Teh' awesomes angel who rox teh' sox off you fawkin' feet,
-Day'
Mizu Hikari
2006-05-12 . chapter 1
I liked it...it was very cute! Nice job! ^-^
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