 tifastrife7 2008-04-07 . chapter 1Sweet. It was bound to happen. |
 Fallen-Yuki 2007-03-17 . chapter 1This was adorable. I like the way you write. I don't normally like Yuffie and Reno either O_o if that says anything! Probably not, but it was good. =] |
 sorrowful love-Xemall 2006-08-13 . chapter 1vary nice, i likkie |
 Sienna03 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Fantastic! I love the style: the way you phrase things are great. Good job; can't wait for more! |
 The-Algebraist 2006-05-13 . chapter 1fantastic. I love this story. I've always liked the yuffie reno pairing, i've done one myself actually. But it takes place when yuffie is working in Tifa's bar. This is a well written story. The telling seeps knowledge and skill. I love the discription of both of them and how they feel. It's great. Well written and enjoyable. Well Done |
 Kesganda 2006-05-11 . chapter 1Aww, that was really cute.^^ I loved how you wrote this. So romantic XD I think this is the best Yuffie/Reno pairing I've read yet.^^ |
 gimcrack chimera 2006-05-11 . chapter 1You've started writing some more short stories that are mainly romantical, and while I adore your long stories as well, the short ones are so delightfully fun. An unorthodox relationship, portrayed precisely in the way it seems most likely to go. Awesome. |
 Sabriel41 2006-05-11 . chapter 1Okay, "flerble!" is really the best way to respond to this. And I thought my grin was big when I got the story alert...!
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Sol, this is too much fun; the little details like their taste in drinks and Yuffie's going down four tunnels before deciding to read the destination written above them; the "Red," the "Short Stuff" names... you write these two as they should be written; spunky and ineffable and utterly lovable for all their quirks.
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As well, the story is well-paced and very easy to visualize; for all that the bulk of the characters' action occurs in an inebriated haze, it's easy for the reader to see what is going on.
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Cheers~
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