Good fic, I like the Dark Obi-Wan genre.
One question, What's with the titel? Dark Jedi! Obi-Wan...the "!" is a little out of place, but i guess that it kinda puts emphasis on the dark jedi part. Otherwise I like the fic, it's well written, you got the characters VERY much in character. Too bad that Obi turned 'cause of Siri, I LOATH Siri, (this is me to Jude Watson) she is a waste of ink and paper, lacks substance and depth, and makes Obi-Wan seem out of character. The Watson lady SUCKS. Your fic, however, does not and is better than the books. I really like your fanfiction and are a very promising writer, I sense you will go far on this site ;)

AH!
Obi-Wan! Bad boy!
Great job, you have a knack for tragedy. Oh, poor Ani. And Obi. Padme ,too. Poor everyone.

OH! Continue this one, I LOVE IT!!?!?!?!!

*pets the Dark!Obi*