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QueenTiria
2009-06-22 . chapter 5
That was the absolutely most hilarious fic ever. I really couldn't stop laughing. I had to do a double take when you proposed a rerun though... because that's EXACTLY WHAT BONES IS DOING. My friend, you're psychic.
Actually, not much of a rerun as a re-DO. Manga-verse certainly will be better and pompous Edward Benson (where did you learn of his last name?) will have ZERO SCREEN TIME. ahahahahaha...

anyway, off to massage my sore mouth into shape after uncontrollably smiling for the last half hour.

QueenTiria^^
Red Roses2
2009-04-30 . chapter 5
That was hilarious! Who knew you had funny stuff instead of the ever suspenseful and dramatic Mirrorworld? And I loved every minute of this story! Great job!
LillFia
2009-01-07 . chapter 5
that was the funniest FMAstory ever haha, great job!

I loved this moment the most:

"The two of you are utter morons," Ed hissed. "We're fucking Onscreen. Now shut up and act like you're supposed to!"

Al's eyes grew wide. "We-we're what Onscreen?"

Ed blinked. "I said we're fucking-...That's not funny, Al." He turned beet red.

one word: roflmao. :D

And it ended with EdWinry, perfect :)
Sora Livana
2008-05-17 . chapter 5
The idea of this fanfic is absolutly amazing! Well done ^^
Red Tatsu
2008-05-16 . chapter 2
I love the fic and all, but... I don't really see what was wrong with the ending. Also, I like the snake/dragon that Envy turns into. It's not butt-ugly! It's a pretty dragon! I really do find this fic funny, though.
Evil Pixies Are Yummy
2008-05-08 . chapter 5
great up until you RUINED it with my beloved envy running off in tears. :'( i wanted ed to shout at him "COME BACK MY SWEETIE!" but no. :(. i also wanted some random royEd shoved in there. but oh well. can't get everything ^^
EnbiiElric
2008-01-02 . chapter 5
that was a really cool story XD better than the actual ending

if only FMA woul've been like this :P
Potgenie
2007-12-25 . chapter 5
This is just too funny! Love the ending. Great story!!
Shuricel
2007-12-23 . chapter 5
Oh...my...gosh...I hurt myself from laughter reading this. xD

Loved how the series ended.
AkitaFallow
2007-11-30 . chapter 5
Oh, this was so funny! It's the most original thing I've ever read, and I've read a lot (refer to my Favs list...)

I loved everything about it! Edward Benson would be a fun character to write! It was just so funny! Loved it, loved it, loved it! I loved how they ended the series so the Scriptwriter couldn't rerun it. Yay for Mutinies! Go freedom!
September Rhyme
2007-11-22 . chapter 5
I LOVED the ending!! It was hilarious!

And I love Ed and Winry, so that's awesome too.

Lol, scriptwriter, SUX 2 B U!

XD

Wonderful story, just wonderful.

:)
Mistress-of-Misery
2007-11-18 . chapter 5
BWAHAHAHAHA. That was awesome, totally awesome. x]
September Rhyme
2007-08-03 . chapter 4
Now,

WRITE MORE CRACK-Y GOODNESS!

XD

That was very funny.

Again.

XD
September Rhyme
2007-08-03 . chapter 3
That was really funny.

Again.

But who's Edward Benson?!?!?!

DX

But still...

WRITE ON!

Which you have ALREADY DID!

XD
September Rhyme
2007-08-03 . chapter 2
This was just as funny as the last.

How do they know English if England doesn't frickin' exist?!??!

WHATEVER!

TIS FUNNY!

XD
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