Flippin' fantastic. Unbelievably good, in fact.
I'm going to look for your second part to this =)

You are brilliant. Simply brilliant.

*goes back to reading*

Best arm wrestling match ever ;) I couldn't stop grinning through this chapter.
Oh, Vegeta, what have you done?

I'm fascinated. You have quite a way with words =)

You can't leave me hanging like that! I immediately went off to find the sequel...is it written somewhere? I really enjoyed "28 Stars" and can't wait to find out what happens next.

I am very glad this story is back! Even though it's the cut version I'm STILL glad to see it again. It's an awesome display of writing quality.

okay, this story is very...interesting. but this is for the previous chapter: i only got to the part right after goku told vegeta that chi-chi was with dabura and then it ended and i couldnt submit a review or nothin...i dont get why i couldnt see anymore cuz i started this chapter and i was confused...if u have the ending any way, can u send it to me either via email (my emails on my page thing) or send me a message on here? i would appreciate it...i want to finish but i cant if i dont have that part b/c im lost at the beginning of this chapter (chpt 12 2:1) so plz and thank you! but as i said, its really good, and i would like to read more i just need that one part.

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VV: can you PLEASE update soon? :pleadingsnif:

Whoa! So awesome! Well, I read this on and mediaminer and I must say every part of this story was great. I'm very very excited to see what happens next and see what happened with the fusion. Very awesome and great! I love it.

Aw, this chapter was so adorable with the water fight and everything. Saiyajins are so competetive, haha! I love how you write your fight scenes, they're great! I am also surprised this story doesn't have more reviews! It's fantastic and your writing style is really good. Also, the idea is very original and entertaining. I'll have to check this story (and others) out on adultfanfiction, too, for the chapters that aren't present. Well, again, great stuff!

Wowee! Great artwork and great writing skills, too. I've only read two chapters so far...and I LOVE it! The characters are exact and your details and descriptions of everything is perfect! Well, I'm off to read more. Great stuff!

I have already read this in other site, I think that you have finished the first part of this story. I'm expecting eagerly the next part. I can only say that you're a genious. I'm fascinated with the way it's written. The way you develop the plot is perfect.
I'm intrigued with the reason why Vegeta has been taken into the dragonball and why is Goku so secretive about it. I guess it's gonna be astonishing.

-shakes head- I CANNOT believe that this fic doesn't have more reviews!

It's absolutely awesome! From the plot to the writing to the smaller details!!

All I can say is that if you haven't read this fic yet, then DO. You won't regret it. And if you're a reader who doesn't review; Shame on you! If you like the fic, then give the author SOME damn encouragement! She deserves it!

-hug- I love you pie x x x x x

Oh my god brilliant chapter!! Now I shall leave them in peace as they go make love. =D ...doesnt mean i wont watch though hhehehehe! Update soon!

A great chapter, keep it going.