 Daikaio 2006-11-06 . chapter 1This was nice ^^ I loved it. |
 lindsaylaurie 2006-05-17 . chapter 1Aw! Cute! I've thought about that too, that Greta would one day look as old as them. |
 Blueraingurl 2006-05-16 . chapter 1I really like this. Yuuri and Wolfram's relationship and growth is very pronounced here, in a very non-obvious way with you not having to elaborate it any further.
Wolfram is in-character and his maturity is very plausible. I also love the fact that Yuuri may have matured himself after their conversation and after realizing that Wolfram had indeed reflected a lot about Greta and how the blond had watched his daugther grow throughout the years.
This also leaves me with a sweet feeling that Yuuri and Wolfram will continue to watch as Greta becomes a woman, gets married and eventually have children of her own. But there was also that lingering sadness that they will eventually 'outlive' her.
And when Yuuri said "strapping young men," I was a bit thrown off. But then I realized that yes, Yuuri is sometimes dorky like that ^^ I like the slice of life feel to this fic/drabble. Thanks for posting this. |
 Ruby-dream 2006-05-16 . chapter 1Aww...this is so sweet! *__* |
 Nomen Ist Omen 2006-05-14 . chapter 1For a "first", this is quite good. In fact, you managed to nail the characters' down perfectly. Yuuri is still his oblivious and ignorant self while Wolfram scolds him for being a "wimp"- it was amusing to read their interaction.
The fic is not too short, not all stories have to be epics in order to be well-written or readable. |
 NaTsUkO-ChAn 2006-05-13 . chapter 1cute^^ |
 Frosty Pig 2006-05-13 . chapter 1Wolfram is awesome in this. Yuuri is lucky to have him as a... lover? Such a wierd word, ^_^! Really cute and the fluff made me cry a little. Dont worry though, I cry because its cute! |
 Sora-Morikawa 2006-05-12 . chapter 1>,< that's what everyone fears... Greta is human... it'll be soo hard for Yuuri and Wolf
*sad*
thanx! ^^/ |
 pinksnow 2006-05-12 . chapter 1cute idea!Wolfie is so kawaii! |