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kooky
2006-08-17
ch 3, anon.
abuseI've seen that video...I like french toast
Phantombeliever
2006-07-12
ch 3,
abuseAlrighty den first one was funny second one okay third one rely needs help. other than that good job!
JediMutant
2006-07-09
ch 2,
abuseLOL! I loved the part with the cape!

I love your style of humor!
Verity Kindle
2006-07-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseWow. This is the epitome of silliness! I love it! Update! Update!!
NinjaPandaOfYouth
2006-07-09
ch 3,
abuseHeheh...I love that song! And I like French toast very much! XD

~Chloe~
AngelicRose8
2006-07-09
ch 3,
abuseHow can they not like French toast? That's insane. lol
PhantomBecca
2006-07-09
ch 3,
abuseHmm... Interesting. I'm not familiar with that song, so I think it would probably have been funnier if I did. It was still funny. Random and quite odd, yes... But funny nonetheless. Keep it up!

Amore Per Sempre...
Bye. See ya. Or not.
2006-07-09
ch 3,
abuseWhat? That's so so so so random it scares me... but it's bloody funny!

bb xx
randomgirl
2006-05-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseFunnyness abroad! I like this story. "Well, he ordered a big ominous red cape." That's hilarious! GOtta go, bye!
NinjaPandaOfYouth
2006-05-26
ch 2,
abuse*gigglesnort*

~Chloe~
Maidenhair
2006-05-19
ch 2,
abuseWoa... I can't see Erik doing that...
It was really funny, though! :)
PhantomBecca
2006-05-17
ch 2,
abuseThe first one was a bit lame, but funny to a point anyway. This second one was really funny, though. I thought so, anyway. 'Liek OMG!' I can just see Gerik saying that, with his hand up in the air in a totally 'valley girl' way. Hehe. Keep 'em coming.

Amore Per Sempre...
Denekrad
2006-05-17
ch 2, anon.
abuseLike OMG! That was, like, so totally cool! OMG! OMG! OMG! Like, update soon, like m'kay?
H. R. Boulter
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseIt's 'shouldn't have' or 'shouldn't've', not 'shouldn't of'.
When people say 'shouldn't of', they really mean 'should not have'.

I'M LOVIN' IT!

I mean... being emo! That's my favourite bit!

I made up some bloopers too... here, take my ideas, I don't want them. Phanty is walking down the stairs. But then the light shines on him and someone says: "Omigosh... HE'S PINK?" and the Persian steps out of the crowd and says: "ERIKYWERIKY! Didn't I tell you not to put the whites in with the reds?" Then everyone makes fun of his name, Erik, which is kind of wussy, you gotta admit it, and there is much re-enacting of the 'Erik the goldfish' sketch off Monty Python... and he's like: "SHUT UP STOP IT!! LOOK AT ME I'M BAD AND SCARY! LOOK I HAVE BLOOD STAINS ON MY FACE!" and they're like: "oh... scared..." and then the Persian is like; "You're right, eh does... YOU CUT YOURSELF SHAVING DIDN'T YOU! AW..." and he's like: "STOP IT! STOP IT!" and runs out, after tripping on his cloak...
Yeah, I know, lame, but you're funny, you can make it funny...
And another one... tailor runs to managers. "THE PHANTOM WILL STRIKE I KNOW IT!" "HOW?" "'CAsue he sent me this order. "One enormously ominous red cloak that does big swishy things... AND DON'T FREAKIN' MAKE IT TOO LONG LIKE A TRIPPING MACHINE!" and there's only one time he wants an enormously ominous red cloak!" "WHEN?" "When he's about to kidnap a chorus girl that no one cares about!" "NO THE FIEND!"
Yeah... I know... lame, but as above.
And I made up another 'bout the title song, and they end up arguing over what each other are saying... you know, Phanty thinks she's a crazy, demented fungus that liked to feed on deformed faces... (that's when she says: "I am the mask you wear") and Christine tells him off for being sexist... (my power over you) and reminds him of women's emancipation... etc... etc...
Emlynn
2006-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE YOUR NAME! And I love your story, too! Keep up the funnies!
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