hehe i liked it hehe

aw... its a shame that you have quit writing V_V i really think you are a very good writer.

i hope that whatever it is that you need to resolve has been resolved and that everything goes well. good luck in whatever it is that you need to accomplish.

i am still hoping that someday you will decide to come back and finish everything that you have started to write here at fanfiction.

god!! why did i read this only now?!? you really have a great plot for this fic! i love it ^_^

Oh, the wonders of originality! Please don't stop! I beg of you!

*translation: Love it. Keep up the terrific work.*

are you going to up-date this or not?

write more :D this is an awesome fic :D

hey I like your story. I was totally lost in the first chapter, but now i under stand *heehe* Anyways i hope you up-date soon!

Great story man one of the best ShikaTema I have seen keep it up... And update!

Please contiue this story! I really enjoy it, and I don't think it will take you too much longer to finsh it.

Gah, great! Fantastic! Memorable! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Right... the story isn't as good as the first one. You could have made the transition from messed up to normal. And Sasuke doesn't seem as cool as he should be... but anyway i give it like 3/5.

I like this fic so far. Please update soon!

i like the plot alot... update soon XD i cant wait to see wut happens..

I can only say that if temari cant tell its shika, shes realli dumb. theres jus so many clues..heesh..
anyway, i still like ur stori though

You keep switching from first person to third person, and it drives me crazy! It also makes it a little hard to follow when you're trying to figure out which "I" is speaking. I really like the story line, but slow it down a bit, add a bit more description and be a little more clearer on who's speaking, even if it's supposed to be someone we don't know yet, like a "mysterious figure." Other than that... yeah!