That cannot be put into words. It is worthy (much more than worthy. This story spits on "worthy") of much more praise than I can put into words. It's peotic, and beuatiful (even if I don't much like A/H). Amazing.

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I never read anything this sad. I'm not a person who cries in front of others, but this story made me cry in front of a lot of people. I think this story tells the reader that love is dangerous and is delicate. I can't say any more. I have tears running down my cheeks. All I can say is that you're a wonderful author and should consider taking it up as a profession.

- anonymous revier how loved/ hated this story because it was sad and beautiful. I don't know how you can love and hate something, but I do. Don't take offence.

P.s- I am an H/T fan, but I still love your story, even if it is A/H.

...nobody should be able to write this well. So brilliant I don't even know what to say.

This was really interesting, and enjoyable :)

Wow... This is very good. I'm not usually a fan of angst fics, but this is just...wow. Even if it does show my least favorite of Artemis Fowl pairings winning (A/H), this is still incredibly well-written. Good job.

Yes, I know I'm 2 years late... It's still good.

This is very much so awesome. With insanity and all, and very intellegent and well-written prose, I'm favoriting it. It's seriously awesome.

kinda confusing and who knew Trouble was so weird and...screwed up

This is absolutely, beautifully crafted. Every sentence, every detail flows like poetry. I love the aquarium motif, the way you create the sense of place by contextualizing the events with "backstory," and the minimalist yet powerful way the whole thing is executed. (If I didn't have homework I would go on.) But this is just about perfect; beautiful and brilliant. MORE FICLETS!

Dear God, Yeti, you are killing me! I have exams tommorrow and I am staying up to devor your fics! I've reviewed you on AFC and then I relized that you might have a profile on FF so I go over and *poof* here you are! This story is going on my favs, you are going on my favs! You are such a fantastic writer and I so wish i could write like you do, but I'm content with just reading your work! Great Job!

P.S: I NEED you to update Birds Of A Feather! It's my FF crack!

~Gema~

Whoa! This is GOOD! I mean seriously good! You write with an incredible power, and your characters demand attention. This is without a doubt the best AF fic I have ever read. Your attention to detail is wonderful, and your descriptions so vivid - I love your use of colour, and the extended fish metaphor! A brilliant and disturbing look into Trouble's psyche. They are not Colfer's characters, exactly, but you make them your own, and do so with an eviable skill. Thank you.

Why is it that I can't find words to describe this? Maybe because it's so good? Probably. This is amazing. It really is. It's fantastic. Just beautiful. It's going on my favourites. Thank you so much for writing this, it's... gosh. Wow.

Wow. I loved it. A very powerful, honest, and raw piece. The fish subtitles were very clerver yet subtle, and I adored the writing style. Good luck with the Orion Awards, I hope you win.

...I'm in tears.
"If this is my murder, it's also yours."
"Fingernails leave crimson crescents in Trouble’s palms. The pain is not enough to distract him from those pretty boy blue eyes, which sparkle like moonlight on ocean waves."
I don't know if you meant this to be vaguely slashy, but I am so reading it like that. =| I love it, of course. =)
"He is too cowardly to face their voyeurism."
Exceedingly gorgeous &/or ironic. =D
"The moment freezes."
Gah.
And yes. I won't go on about this. I love this more than I can express. It's absolutely bloody beautiful. I wish I could write even a shred as well as you can. Everything you write is poetic, and poignant, and truthful. I hate you with jealousy and love you with reverence for it.

Oh sweet heaven. This is BRILLIANT, and so going on my favourites. I like the use of the fish as 'chapters'.

Wow This is really powerful...great writing and um...wow..that was just really good!

/:/Brizo/:/