|Reviews for Sixth|
| ihonestlydontknow 12/17/09 . chapter 1
Very well-written future fic. Shikamaru is a very interesting person, isn't he? What you've written is very realistic. Even more so than the actual series. Tragedy, but not overwhelming, and Shikamaru was very in-character. Well done.
| Unbidden-Angel 11/8/08 . chapter 1
I really loved it! Poor Shika-kun. I feel sorry that they all died.
| Linnorria 4/20/08 . chapter 1
That was entirely poetic. Beautiful. Thank you.
| darklace15 1/2/08 . chapter 1
This sounds awful, but I loved the paragraph explaining the deaths of each character-who was still left and who had moved on. They were all perfect.
| gracemis 7/14/07 . chapter 1
Somehow, this captures how Shikamaru would approach being the sixth very well. That is, it is very "in character", i would guess.
You put together a few very striking lines too. "That’s the only nice thing about having half the population wiped out at a go. Less old people... Less people from his generation, too, of course, but not as many less. If that makes any sense"
That is a very nice turn of phrase. thought-image provoking, cynical, and very slightly optimistic all at the same time.
| Krizzie 3/30/07 . chapter 1
ooh...that's just like shikamaru... i like the descriptions while shikamaru went through them.
| fraught 3/9/07 . chapter 1
I don't understand why this concept isn't more popular- no, not the 'everyone is dead' part but the 'Shikamaru as Hokage' bit. The only other place I've seen it is in the "Naruto Primer," which is a very (VERY) different kind of fic.
Which isn't a bad thing- I loved the tragedy that never really went into angst because this is Shikamaru and he doesn't brood like that. There were times that it almost went to humor- Hinata and Anko, for example. Your last paragraph is pure Shikamaru: he hopes it works but if it doesn't he's done what he can. And also, cloudgazing.
| Planet Mads 3/8/07 . chapter 1
Oh God. Almost cried. You made it so realistic. Poor, poor Shikamaru. Poor everyone. It's such a perfect one-shot. It's sad but a nice-sad. As you have everyone together on the Memorial Stone. The ending was brilliant of course. And totally Shikamaru-like. So brilliant.
| Destiny1029 2/7/07 . chapter 1
I love Shikamaru one shots. They always get to me. Wonderful perspective!
Great job once again
| dreamlifter 1/30/07 . chapter 1
Good companion piece. liked seeing Shikarmaru's POV
| L0v3L3ss 1/24/07 . chapter 1
God youi killed everyone... Good story thought...
| the waffle 11/4/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really, really good. I liked the other one as well.
I could see this happening.
| Nilladriel 10/29/06 . chapter 1
Intriguing idea, but it fits, somehow. I like the tone, and the way you made everyone's deaths so REAL. Amazing job, all n' all.
| youdontneedtoknow 10/19/06 . chapter 1
| Falconfire 9/3/06 . chapter 1
O_O Gee. That popped my happy bubble. O_O
See, the reason I actually am about to cry is because that's so well-written that I can actually see it happening.
I'll shut up and leave now before I start blubbering.