Nice, started angsty and ended cute.

Great fake out! You should have had Thandie say 'you staying for breakfast, Sara or is that mom?

I loved this story. The first two chapters were killing me because I was so sad for Sara. I knew you were just messing with our minds about Grissom hooking up with another chick, but there was still a tiny bit a doubt hanging there the whole time (I mean you never know what fanfic writers have up their sleeves, right?). I loved how you had Grissom show up at Sara's place in his court suit. Mega hot. I also liked how the last chapter wrapped the story up on a happy, and very funny, note. Anything having to do with Grissom's booty is fine by me, especially when it's bare.

It was realy great i think you should make one more chapter

awesome story- I loved it! So surprising and intense. I loved the last chapter- Great job.

I really loved this story. The last chapter was a real laugh bringer. And how like Grissom to not tell his people who Thandie was. Thanks for brighting my day.

i love this story ;)

is it too much to ask for a sequel? pretty please :)

THAT WAS FRICKIN' AWESOME! *coughs* I mean.. really good.. hehe

Lisa

I know you wrote a sequel to this, so I'm really glad I got to read about more of Jonathan in this last chapter. Grissom shaking his own booty *imagines it*

Another shake, Grissom pulls me closer. Is that a banana in his pocket? “Gris he’s in here.”

I thought he supposedly hated bananas. But I do know he likes to experiment with pickles. ;)

Oh thank goodness he's only her daughter. What a close call!I keep reading the parts where it all comes together for Sara, over and over again. I love your take on Sara's inner voice. I've always seen her as snarky and witty. And good call on the court suit. Grissom is sex in his court suit.

Excellent!

You should consider a sequel to this exploring Grissom and Sara married with his daughter and grandson in tow.

I like Thandie's personality and think she and Sara would have a lot of fun!

I like the idea of the story, very "cute" :) And my favorite qoute was “Five minutes.”lol great job!

Awesome fic! I was so angry at Grissom until I found out that Thandie was his daughter, lol! I thought it was hilarious that Griss totally thought that Sara knew, and had no idea why she was so mad... awesome work - keep writing!

Loved it.

favorite line: "He’s got on his court suit. God, I want you to know that this is not fair.", he does look damn fine in a suit LOL

Please keep 'm coming (and don't forget about Folly or Happily ever after, I'm dying here ;-))

Uh!!*Puts hand over heart and falls back in chair* I thought I was gonna have a heart attack! The idea of griss with another woman! And one whose younger! ARGH! Thank you so much for making thandie his daughter...then again the idea that he HAS a daughter is kinda scary...The ending was great though! ^_^ I got the image of WP booty! He's got one nice booty though!! XD