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| baby gyrl 2008-06-18 ch 3,  | abuseThat was almost as sad as the first chapter. |
| baby gyrl 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseInteresting how the second chapter is written in a different style than the first. I guess that is to be expected because it is a different situation that is being written about. I liked this one because it shows what I thought was wrong with Sleeping Beauty: That she can never be normal because of all these "gifts." |
| baby gyrl 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sad. I liked it though. I get what Kenneth means about the fire and smoke and all. It was interesting. |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-29 ch 7, | abuseThis was a very good story. I'm not sure what tale it was based on though. I liked the way it was writen as when she was young then getting married and then as a grandmother. It worked very well. It made me keep reading when the story after the begin was weird and i couldn't figure out the story. ~Mallory VH |
| Symbolist 2008-04-27 ch 10, | abuseThese are all fantastic! Great job, I love how you put the different spins on them! Usually second generation fairy tales are awful, but these are very original. Do you mind my asking which fairy tales are chapter seven ("Know"), chapter nine ("Delicacy"), and chapter ten ("Unwise")? My guesses were that "Delicacy" was Princess and the Pea and "Unwise" was Bluebeard, but I wasn't sure. And I have no idea what "Know" was. Awesome work, though, these are really great! |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-26 ch 5, | abuseThis one was a little werid i'm not sure what story it was but you still write very well so i liked it. good job. ~Mallory VH |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-26 ch 4, | abusePretty odd, I'd have to say yet strangly good. The idea was interesting and a good play off the story, it's my favorite tale of all, so i was a litle werided out by you story but i liked it anyway. ~Mallory VH |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseThis one was very cute. i liked how she was talking to the flower the whole time, it kinda gave you a though inside a little kids head. How confusing the find things and how the try to mak sense of everything in their own way. very good job at portraying a little kid it's one of my favorite ways to write charcters and read from their POV's. Very cute in whole. ~Mallory VH |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-26 ch 2, | abusethis one was great as well. i didn't think it was a male talking until about half-way through and even then i had to read it twice to make sure. it was very good i like the whole thing about the curse being a blessing it's good way to portray the story. ~Mallory VH |
| Mallory Van Helsing 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusewow this was very good. A little confusing but i think i got it now. I liked the idea of the fire and wood but i really would have liked to know what happens to Anie and i was a little unsure of what happen to Kenneth. Other than that the story was very good smart idea. ~Mallory VH |
| ice illuser 2007-12-22 ch 9, | abuse...was this princess and the pea? |
| Sera dy Relandrant 2007-12-22 ch 9, | abusewhose? |
| ice illuser 2007-10-10 ch 8, | abusegood chapter! although i didn't get what happened with the witch... |
| sail420247 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abusewow. that was really deep...pause for reflective moment...I loved it. the analogy between fire, wood, smoke, and embers was amazing! |
| Sera dy Relandrant 2007-10-10 ch 8, | abuseLovely, simply lovely. A rushed pace but suited well to the old wives' tale-esque setting of this. |