FUNNIFUL! HA! Classic carmelita! well this was good! bye!

i liked it! this roxs socks, it also was funny!

Hee, Hee, poor Carmelita. Anyway... I found this poem about a year ago and fell in love with it and... the picture you did with it. Oh man the was the best. I'm not a member of deviantart but I'm always visiting your profile to see if you've drawn anything new. Put up the great work.

-Your fan
Living on

This was a great christmas poem!
I loved it !!

wow, this was very good! i love how it rhymed so well.And it told a story, i also love how u made the characters personalitys very much like the characters in the game. this was extremely awesome! im glad i found this lovely poem!^-^

Oh I love it, you're so talented! I love the part where Carmelita wanted to shove his face in the gutter. hAHA

the way you wrote about the characters are just like the charasteristics in the game. great poem :}

Words fail me. I love it to pieces! :D

Sweet! It's absolutely A-W-E-S-O-M-e! I LOVED IT!