I'll be honest, I'm not really familiar with the character of Bludgeon so I'm not sure how on target you are with him, but I like this piece a lot. You've got a very good grasp of action scenes and I like that Bludgeon is a bad ** who still has flaws. Also nice to see Magnus written as a capable solider instead of a joke. Keep writing, I like your stuff alot (and didn't realize until I came here that you wrote the Praying Grimlock story too -- also a damn fine piece).

Kathy/Dun