When I saw the summary, I was like, "Shouldn't this be rated M?", with eyes bulging out.

But this is very nice! You're good at these! *wink wink*

i love it! can't wait to read more. update soon!

Wah! You make fanfics fast! You must have a big imagination! Update soon, 'kay? OH, and where do you download the manga?

I love it when Natsume's jealous! Again, I LOVE your story!

Ohh! Someones jealous! LOVE YOUR STORY! Update soon!

nice! please update soon!

Ooh! Look who's jealous!

I'm truely enjoying this fic and I need updates soon to keep myself functioning XD

Since I'm *supposed* to be doing my homework, I skimmed this (I'm going to procrastinate soon though), and I didn't see any grammatical mistakes so far.

Update soon!