umm

this story sounds incomplete somehow...

but Yamazaki's lies were funny

Well, the story was very cute, and you kept up with the original characterization of each character, but what was the point of it? I really didn't notice much of a plot, and it seems as if it should have had a few more chapters to it.

~Miko

hey.. love your story. I'll definitely be waiting for the sequel

Please write a sequel to this story.I really want to see what happen in the end.

Write a sequel.

Wonderful. I would really like to know what happens next. If you plan to continue. I hope so. Well. Ja ne!

Tam~Chayn

Wow, what is up with the zapping thing between Syaoran and Sakura every time they touch each other? And negative aura from Kero? Hmm...

xD The bickering between Syaoran and Kero was so cute ^__^ I feel like you need more descriptions though. It seems as if your story is all about dialogue and it makes it hard for readers to imagine where they are and such. Just a suggestion =]

Hey, it's not suckish =] It's pretty good so far, what with the whole thing at the beginning with Kero. That definitely freaked me out. And I want to see what happens that leads to your title. Why does she have to sacrifice?

Anyway, one thing: I'm pretty sure you meant 'voodoo' instead of 'vudu'...but maybe I'm wrong? I don't know. Just letting you know though =]