That was really sad, but i guess that was the point. Well iether way it was still really good!

Love,

AJ

i am crying very hard. write another story.

KAGOME/INUYASHA OVER EVERYTHING!

I mean, it was pretty good. And I adore Our Darewell by Within Temptation.

Kind of sad, actually, but I prefer it that way. You really are good at this .. keep writing! And log on msn more often or rather when I'm on! Or just tell me when you're gonna be on or something!

I mean .. -coughs- .. good fic.

Not a bad one-shot, but I think that you should have elaborated a bit more on the fight between Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. I thought that the story was worded well, but it didn't really give a lot of insight into the situation. Hope that you take my advice into condiseration and that you use it. Keep writing! You have skill, all it needs is a little bit of polish and it will be a diamond!