This is a review for the general story, rather than chapter, because God knows that would take too long. ;;

Beautiful, almost in ephemeral way. You strike a nice balance between angst and romance; although the angst with pretty overpowering the first few chapters, it didn't feel forced - it flowed. The way you write their relationship - the only word I can think of right now is "soft" - if very beautiful. It's poignant and inspiring.

I hope to see more in the future. :]

I love your writing. I mean, really.
I must say that NejiTen is not my favorite pairing, but they are an awesome pairing I should pay more attention to.

Congratulations~

My God, these are beautiful. I love your writing style, it reads almost like poetry.

Great job, wildcatt.

I hope you have an infinite amount of fluff in your system, because your stories are beautiful (you really have a way with words). XDD

Thank you for such a wonderful collection of nejiten one shots!

The comment about Tenten's apartments condition had me cracking up really really really really hard. 8D

It was beautifully written and it made me cry. Usually I don't like first person but this was great. :)

We all need to write some fluff from once in a while, it's not a seen at all. XD
Personally, I enjoyed both fics thoroughly, the customary of it all...reminded me of how well they fit with each other. It was lovely.

aw!! That was a GREAT way to end this set of moments! Just like that, the whole emotion and point of everything put into three lines. Because that's really the crux of the matter. I love it. LOVE IT.

I've really come to adore your writings now, not just because you write beautiful nejiten fics, but also because of the themes and moods you write about. I checked our your past one-shots and chinese nejiten FST on your LJ, and now I love your writings for the way you bring the spotlight onto the complex NejiTen fandom~

wow...its so good i'm speechless...

aw! that was absolutely adorable!! :D

Couldn't help but grin while reading this. =] Loved "Her apartment resembles the lovechild of an industrial landfill and a weapons museum. " XD

SO. CUTE. Also funny! You give Tenten the best traits.

Good job. Nice little piece =)

I love this
Love how well they know each other, even the small things.
Very soft, very quiet and peaceful.