So darkly cute! you should write more chapters even if they are drabble chapters!

Wonderful work.I love KimiTayu!

good fic! I love It!

I also love Kinimaro a little... But, he died in the anime... T_T

poor kinimaro...

XD Hahaha, this was truly awesome. I'm just now getting into Kimimaro x Tayuya, and this was a great representation of what their relationship would be like. _

This is so cute and amusing. I love this pairing!

The ending really catches you too, good job!

The end line made me laugh. Well done!

AND HOORAH GRUMPY TAYUYA!

That was great! Personally, I think Tayuya does have a nice ass but Kimi's is nicER! lol. Again, great.

::giggles:: Oh, man, that was just priceless. I loved it! YAYA!

Seriously, so good. I have raed this 7 times so far, over a span of at least a few months, and it never fails to impress me. Fabulous job!

That was really ncie and cute! I loved it :D lol, I'm even blushing. XD

This was funny and amusing. I definitely love this.

I like this, because it's realistic and interesting to read. Especially the contrasts to their personalitys.

This was a great fanfic. I believe that I'm in love with Tayuya _ and I am so interested in Kimimaro. Wonderfully written, and very enjoyable to read, thank you

...i didnt know kimi-kun was such a pervert...*kills tayuya* HE'S MINE! BACK OF BI-OSH!

lol yes Tayuya is so loveable! Nice job on the story! I loved it _