Told you I'd get to reviewing! So...Slade with a god-mode cheat, there's a scary thought. Nice work so far, I'm curious to see what the true depths of the Solari powers really are. Also, where can I get a Gilgas of my own? That'd come in handy fer gettin' around. I shall be watching for the update! Happy writing!

Great dialogue this chapter. Everything they would say or do... It could be animated. And the slightly ominous tone toward the end will bring me back for more... I'm anticipating your next update :)

I love how this story keep progressing! Your character, the plot... This was well worth the wait! Great chapter. Keep it comin' :)

Yet another two masterful chapters. As always, your diction and imagery did not disappoint. These pages are crystal clear! I tore right through both of these.

I can’t wait for the next one :)

I waited anxiously for chapter 6 which came out yesterday after a week of chapterless, epileptic fits. You got this one out fast! But I assume that it was written a bit ago becuase it wasn't botched at all. Another great chapter, another great string of events!

-Dark

Impecably written my friend! This was truely a well peiced together and well thought out chapter. I enjoyed how the characters mannerisms just become more and mpre in depth and your insight on this very Dungeons and Dragons style magic is full. I always honor my requests... Honor and join me and my staff in Flickering Lights as you please.

-Dark

Excellent chapter. The dialogue was dynamite here!

Also to credit your talent: Your Robin was dead-on. I think some people have a tough time with such a complex character, but you’ve got no worries there… I’m intrigued where the next chapter is headed with Naveas. Again, excellent chapter, excellent character :)

An interesting, character, Saevan. I like his style, his ability to look everyone in the eye and his sense of confidence. Your writing is very good and I like how yo story is moving. If you keep up with it, I might ask you to join Flickering Lights... (It's C2 made up of some of the best writers ut there.) I'll need to see more of your work but your definately eligable. It would be absolutly your choice of course. Please consider my proposition. I'm going to Pm you about some thing else also...

-Dark

poor cyborg! i dont want anybody seperating him apart! hes too cool for that sort of treatment!

by the way you created some awesome suspense with the robin part there, i almost fell off my chair...im serious!

pls update soon, i must know who was dissembling cyborg...that idiot...hes going to get a very angry fanfic writer after him if he succeeds...jk chill

Chapter four was awesome! This battle scene that you wrote was unlike most that I've read. The diction and imagery you used kept this chapter bursting with visualization. Keep it coming :)

Ooh! This gets better and better! Loved the description you put into these chapters.

I hope you update soon... Don’t leave us hanging for too long :)

I love the way you set up your plot. The passages are well written and the dialogue is dynamic. You’ve got a very smart story here. I’ll be keeping an eye on this. Please keep it coming :)