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RavenxWings
2008-08-04 . chapter 9
Yay! I really liked this story! ^ ^ I would make you a plate of cookies for it, but I suck at cooking. . . -.- Oh well. I loved the whole deer-analogy thing! I kept giggling randomly and making my sister look at me weird because she has no idea that I'm reading yaoi. Heheh. . . Well, anyway, this was happyful. I thought it ended a bit too soon, but that's way better than having it drag on forever and ruining the story. But please ignore my opinion because I don't really matter. Anyway, great job! I'm planning on reading a few more of your stories, too, so you can look forward to/dread (take your pick) hearing from me again soon.
Tsuki no Akebono
2008-04-30 . chapter 9
i love it love it i love it!
i love you i love you i heart you!!
that was a very very AWESOME and kewl!
Rinix14
2008-03-17 . chapter 8
Love it much!
Rinix14
2007-08-18 . chapter 5
this is really good please although i know you wrote more for this story write more because it is really good!
darkchild
2007-02-26 . chapter 8
Please update as soon as possible, this story is great^_^...
Celendiar
2007-01-28 . chapter 8
Aw, this is truly very cute story. The way Zexion and Demyx got together was not the cliché way and I give you credit for that. :D I also give you much credit for writing them very IC - chapter 7 was probably my favorite. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
yllom21
2007-01-24 . chapter 8
Cute story, and nicely written. Amusing in some parts as well.
SetsuntaMew
2006-10-25 . chapter 8
Oh I like this! It's really funny and sweet and fwee. Good job! Keep it up :D
FangedWriter
2006-10-15 . chapter 3
Cool chapter. I love how Demyx is just so happy to carry a conversation with Zexion. I also like the whole idea about Zexion now realizing they did have emotions.
keep up!
FangedWriter
2006-10-14 . chapter 2
Just wandering into this story, and I like it! I love the pairing and have done something with it myself. I like it so far. I'd read it all now, but well, there's stuff I really should be doing XD. Yeah, my problem with getting offline is that I keep clicking on things :)
Anyway, love it and will probably read the rest tonight!
FlowerAssassin
2006-09-22 . chapter 8
Really sweet story~ Cute and random~
n_n I love it~
Kitty29
2006-09-20 . chapter 8
teehee, yesh, Revenge is sweet..*thunder* lol, I like the story, I think it's cute!
*What's so cute about two grown men having sex?*
Oh, inner me! Roxas is about meh age!
*...*
update whenever! =3
Sekre
2006-09-18 . chapter 8
Nice ^^
Firey-Moonlight
2006-09-17 . chapter 8
LOL funny! Good job, though I wished the chapters were longer (then again I'm a person who writes around 12 pages for my chapters and I've gotten reviews saying they're too long). Love the pairings ^^
ChaosHarbor
2006-09-15 . chapter 8
its great^^
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