Wow. I never ever read M rated stories. But, it sounded like it had a good plot, i read it (I just skipped the sex)
Well done, especially if English is not your native language.
Good plot, okay story. I'll be off to read the sequel now! XD
4/5

"There were a lot of bad things about him. He talked creepy, he acted creepy, he had a creepy deathstare, he was/is a brutal killer, he is insane but that slowly went over into terms like 'he has quite beautiful eyes, I like his hair, I'll bet he has a nice body, maybe he isn't that insane anymore'."

LOL omg, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this fic! Everyone's interactions were just so in-character...and the lemon made me squee! XD

I can't wait to read the other GaaHina oneshots you have! Great job!

holy hotness...will definitely read the sequel. i do so love gaara/hinata.

Wow I never expected that he`ll took her virginity now./in the first atory/. ;]

tht waz so fxing sweet! cant w8 tw read da nxt one! BAI!!

*drools* so hot XD

little bad on the grammer and word usage, but overall it was really good.

wow kinda sad ending T_T

I love you and that story

Wow...that was...fast, but good. I liked it, and don't worry. Your english is good, there are a few mistakes, but other than that, you did fine, and I understood the story, so no worries. Loved it!

OMFG that was so sweet! u should write a sequel to this...

Ouch! That was sad... But not as sad as your '5 years' though.

Nice one, as always.

wow, very good shot

Nice!

Wow, I am going to say that was probably the best GaaraxHinata fic that I've found on fanfiction in a while. People seem to have a hard time portraying Gaara in a romantic/emotional way, but I have to say that you did a good job. I'm going to go read the others now, so keep writing!