A very interesting look at their relationship! Definitely well written, and poignant. Nice job on this.

[Because of that, she’ll always win.]

Pretty good. Short, but it has insight to it. Please keep writing more!

X

Crimson Black

Very meaningful, but I don't think it is all really true to Star's personailtiy and the story lines (and possibly even the comic lines) so to this story I say, "eh..."

-Em