Good story.

Good Tag. Very powerful sicne it dosen't have words!

Good tag to Grace Under Pressure. :) Though you might want to put a space in between paragraphs to make it a little easier to read, but otherwise, it was great. Good job! ;)

I loved this! It was so... nice, for lack of a better word. Very, very good. Please continue!

Dude, say it with me. PAragraph breaks. I couldn't read a goddamn word, I kept getting lost.