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| First Gurl Rider 2008-01-10 ch 22,  | abuseur sequel sounds good. Wat will it be called. |
| eyelovefantasy 2008-01-09 ch 22, | abuseWow! This story is great! Update soon! |
| Tall Star 2008-01-08 ch 22, | abuse...I'm going to cry! It's a great story, but poor Cadi :( Does this mean Thorn's dead too? That's sad. But great story, put your next one up soon! ~TS |
| 3rd clss rckstr 2008-01-08 ch 22, | abuseWow... that's alot of drama for one chapter... GREAT! I loved it! Poor Cadi :( Now she's like a killing machine against the Varden, or what? Update SOON PLEASE! xxAspenxx |
| First Gurl Rider 2008-01-03 ch 21, | abuseThe ending was so sad. |
| redfeatherz 2007-12-31 ch 21, | abuseI officially HATE YOU! -sob- you killed Murtagh! D: |
| dyingimmortal 2007-12-31 ch 21, | abuseI liked it! A lot. You didn't really kill Murtagh off... did you? I hope you didn't; he's my favorite character. Anyway, write a sequel/new chapter? (It doesn't say 'Complete'...) |
| alsdssg 2007-12-30 ch 21, | abuseOh God, did they really kill him? Please tell me that it was someone. And what's Galbatorix going to do with Thorn? Give him to Tarra? |
| 3rd clss rckstr 2007-12-30 ch 21, | abuseNO! Murtagh can't die! I cried... It's a GREAT story, but I can't believe you killed Murtagh you horrible person! :( Just kidding, but I still can't beleive it! Update soon please! *cries* Atra du avarinya ono varda. May the stars watch over you. -Aspen |
| Tall Star 2007-12-30 ch 21, | abuseNO!! Oh my gosh...you killed Murtagh? Aw, the means Thorn's gone too, I like that dragon. :( Start that second book soon, or I'll go berserk. ~TS |
| eyelovefantasy 2007-12-30 ch 21, | abuseWow! This story is great! I never expected it to end like that! |
| silver mystic ivy storm lea... 2007-12-30 ch 21, | abuseaw, why did murtagh have to die? that as really sad! but at teh same time really good!! well done! |
| eyelovefantasy 2007-12-26 ch 15, | abuseGreat story! I hope you continue! |
| TrollsHaveBigLaughs 2007-12-15 ch 20, | abuseI love it...i think there were some errors on ur part...like i think is chapet 16 or smth when the razzac use a spell...well they are supoosed to be incapable of magic |
| First Gurl Rider 2007-12-15 ch 20, | abuseVery good. So, Tarra can use magic... awesome!! |