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Reviews For: Sweet Imperfections

Fox soul
2006-10-31
ch 1,
abuseThat was sweet!
Anon
2006-05-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseYour last line makes no sense.

I don't like your writing style, it's totally too wordy and inaccessible. How anybody can say they like your crap is beyond me.

I think they're just saying it to humour you.

But that's just my opinion. maybe they DO like it. I don't. make your things easier to read if you wanna do better. Kay?
Alexander - Godslayer
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abuseSweet! Sweet!! SWEET! ^o^

You just gave me what I love from our dear Nevan, and in a Yuri Fic! Thank you so much! ^^

Alastor and Trish were pettry funny! ^^
I usually wonder where does Ifrit, Cerberus and Beowulf stay, since they are too big to stay in the house. No wonder why Lucia didn't see them.

Did I ever tell that I used to confuse Lucia's name with Julia? ^^U

Anywhat, thanks for such a great fic!
See ya later!
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