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| daileyt 2008-06-06 ch 18,  | abuseI really liked your story. |
| CarineM 2008-05-14 ch 18, | abusegreat story!! |
| CarineM 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseyou must have read that a lot but I have to tell you, right now I hate your Temperance, she doesn't even deserve to be called Bones. Maybe it's a little cruel I don't know all the facts so I'll see. I'm worried about Parker, I hope he is fine. and poor Booth |
| allymcnally 2008-02-13 ch 18, | abuseCustody battle? There was a custody battle? Did I miss something? Good story btw. |
| Aeryn 2007-09-15 ch 18, anon. | abusereading this story now, so late in the game (nearly the beginning of season 3) your characters seem way off, at least Booth does. I suggest putting in when this story is supposed to have taken place. You did admit yourself that things got away from you, and over such a long time it's understandable, but Booth has never, and I doubt will ever, be as cruel as you portray him in the story. Other than that it's great. It does take a little bit for us to catch up with what's going on but in the end it worked out really well. good job! |
| Tru 2007-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just wanted to tell you - I LOVED your fan fic! It was so amazing, I sat here for 2 hours reading it and didn't stop until I was finished! What they said sounded like what they would say, and I could see happening. It was well written... It could be published! lol. Wow! I loved it! I hope you write fan fic's all the time because you got talent! Good job! WOW! Lol. |
| Wanderer 2007-03-22 ch 18, anon. | abuseNifty story, not a big BB shipper but it was well rounded and fit into the storyline easily. I'm going to look at your other stories. :) |
| HolidayArmadillo 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWhat? When? Why? How? God am I confused! Lovin the fic though! |
| MadeOfStars 2007-01-25 ch 18, | abuseI came upon this story late in the game, but I loved every bit of it. You did a great job, start to finish and I look forward to more from you! |
| BonesDBchippie 2007-01-21 ch 18, | abuseUM...OKAY this is embarrassing!! I can't believe I missed the last chapter to this!! I was cleaning out my mailbox and was thinking I'd already done my review! Well...GUESS NOT!! Must of been when all that mix up with the site happened! EXCELLENT ending to a GREAT ff!! Totally lov'd that he told her that not working with her a part of him was missing and he didn't want to do it again! [GAWD I LOVE FLUFF!] AND Angela--too funny with the "oh what the hell" thought talking to Parker! WONDERFUL ENDING!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING! ~G :D |
| Ahria 2006-12-21 ch 18, | abuseThe plot was really interesting. It was an enjoyable read. ^_^ |
| astacia 2006-12-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseThat was just so sweet. Parker is so cute. How about a part two with Parker getting them engaged and the pranks he and Bone cook up to play on Booth? That would be great. |
| Laura 2006-12-20 ch 18, anon. | abuseThis story was just perfect. I loved it. |
| laced-with-fire 2006-12-17 ch 18, | abusethat was a very cool story, well done. |
| Kiya 2006-12-17 ch 18, | abuseAh, I loved this story^_^ Such a sweet ending... Good luck on all of your other writing endevors! |