loved it update soon

Don't worry about your stories or you poem, they are amazing!

aw, i love triatan why kill him? but it was very good

that's beautiful. but it's such a shame he died. have you ever read L.M. Montgomery's "Rilla of Ingleside"? if you have you'll know what i'm talking about when i say this kinda reminds me of walter's death. cya later ~ luv Alenor.

That was pretty good.

Good! Love it but its so sad.

Wow I loved it ! Very sad story.

SAD but a great 1 shot!

I love it. Totally made me cry (in a good way).

Yes, the poem was lovely. I really liked it. I really liked this story...it was so great! I really love it!

Kelli