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| bjxmas 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, that was so perfect! Dean really did reveal the dichotomy in his personality and you captured his conflict and his feelings brilliantly. He has to be willing to kill to protect his family, yet is scares him so to wonder whether he can control it. Great job! B.J. |
| Cindy Ryan 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat insight into Dean as always :) |
| Ghostwriter 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| pizzapixie 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI think you're dead,spot on. There is a killer in Dean that rises to the occasion when needed. In their line of work I think it's an acceptable thing. I know it eats his soul to paraphrase your story, but I don't think he'd want it gone. He needs it way too much! Thanks for the soul glimpse. Please write more. Thanks. |
| rozzy07 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseYou really took me inside Dean's head, detailing how he feels about what he does and the reasons behind it. Chilling stuff and makes me think you could write more on - please. |
| Zenamydog 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow quite powerful really! |
| girlofcandy 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abusethis was very good! dark and angsty just like i love =) |
| ayumidah 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseWow... |